Prof. Kyle Brebner
IERW (03)
6
October 2015
The Kiss
A couple in the painting is
embracing, a woman is kneeling down and a man is kissing her on a flower garden
seemed as a cliff. Overall, it is covered by gold. You will easily find out
what I describe. It is The Kiss, made
by Gustav Klimt. It is the best art I’ve ever seen. I will introduce the
painting’s background, and then describe, interpret and evaluate it on my view.
I want to introduce the background
story of the painting at first. Gustav Klimt, an Austrian symbolist painter, is
known as a best painter for expressing woman historically. And there was a sincerely
beloved woman for him, Emilie Floege,. The
Kiss. He described his fear and precariousness that stemmed from being
abandoned by Emilie by drawing the couple kissing on the edge of a dangerous
cliff in the canvas. And he proposed to her with the painting, and she accepted
it. Since then, they had been together for 27 years with not physical
relationship but platonic love before Klimt died.
The background where couple is kissing
is covered by gold. Traditionally and generally, gold symbolizes wealth. I
think in this painting the gold means sexual pleasure the couple feels. I guess
Klimt might use the gold color to describe that sexual pleasure is as worthwhile
as happiness from the wealth. They are on the flower garden cliff. The flower
garden means happiness when they were together, and I think the cliff can be
interpreted by two ways. The first is anxiety. That is from worries that my
lover might leave me like that Emilie left Klimt. The second meaning I think is
a thrill from kissing. It seems that the pleasure from kissing is as thrilling
as standing on the edge of the cliff. I have not met Klimt, but I think he
would paint The Kiss with this
intention I guess. Then, there is no clue where they are and when. From this
point, I feel like they are renouncing the world and there is no one but them
in the world. No clue about the place and time makes us focus on only their
love without any distracting thoughts. Another point we should focus on when
seeing this painting is the difference of the man and the woman. The man is
wearing on clothes filled by black and gray rectangles, grasping the woman’s
face. I feel rectangular shape means toughness of men, and the colors double
that feeling. Grasping the woman’s face also strongly portrays his masculinity.
On the other hand, there are circles and curves of various colors on the
woman’s clothes. It feels like flowers. The circles and curves of various warm
colors give me a soft sense relatively. I feel obeisance of woman from kneeling
down. Judging from this expressions Klimt did, I cannot help thinking he had a
stereotype of gender like most people in his period.
I felt uncomfortable about the
expression of woman and man, seeing The
Kiss at first. Because, by the colors like gray/black and pink/red and the
shape such as rectangles and circles, the woman is depicted very passively and
obediently, and, contrastively, the man very actively and authoritatively. I
hate this prejudice, especially about the gender. But considering the male-dominated
society Klimt lived, it is possible for me to understand why he had this
thought. I like the background of gold color and the flower garden, as they
express ecstasy from kiss very properly. Especially, I think the flower garden
and the cliff is the best expression of kissing one’s lover. Even though I
don’t know exactly about what Klimt’s intention was, it is the best way of
showing happiness, ecstasy and thrill simultaneously, I think.
All factors of the
painting, including colors, backgrounds and shapes, express the feelings we
have when we are with a beloved person and kiss. So when I see The Kiss, I get an impression that I
want to kiss my lover like them and feel emotions that it seems to be on the
cliff with my lover. That’s why I love this painting best. It lets me have
romantic feelings. Therefore, I recommend you to appreciate The Kiss in detail, then you will be
able to find meanings you didn't know until now and feel like falling in love as
I did.
(Sources
of information : NAVER knowledge encyclopedia, NAVER news)
Good job! You made some nice improvements. It is more focused, and you have a much better thesis statement and conclusion. You can still work on the topic sentences of each paragraph by trying to include a key word from the thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteThank you for a compliment, Kyle!
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